The Writer’s Shanty

What do we do with a wordy writer?

What do we do with a wordy writer?

What do we do with a wordy writer?

Early in the morning!

Cut out all the crap and make it tighter.

Cut out all the crap and make it tighter.

Cut out all the crap, please make it tighter.

Early in th morning.

What do we do with a passive voice?

What do we do with a passive voice?

What do we do with a passive voice?

Early in the morning.

Figure out the action and make a choice.

Figure out the action and make a choice.

Figure out the action and make a choice.

Early in the morning,

What do we do when it all just stinks?

What do we do when it all just stinks?

What do we do when it all just stinks?

Early in the morning.

Rip it up, toss it out, let it sink.

Rip it up, toss it out, let it sink.

Rip it up, toss it out and let it sink.

And get yourself a drink!

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NaPoWriMo 2013: Day 3

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